Tuesday, October 7, 2008

College 100 Assignment

Not enrolled in College 100...

1 comment:

JoshuaSmith said...

-Good thoughts on the quotes, but there's too much "I Say" in your paragraphs. It's important to keep the "I Say" out of it. Instead, just focus on accurately communicating what "They Say."
-Might wanna edit the way you start the quotes. Don't include the "They say" text as apart of the actual quote.